Broken and Beautiful – part 2
I wrote a song in 2013 that wasn’t very good. You can read more about that in Part 1. Despite being damaged beyond repair, I was able to scavenge a few lines. I put these borrowed lines together to make a first verse and chorus.
Your baby blues are bloodshot now
You’ve been at it for way too long
You carry the weight of the world
Upon you shoulders
Your shoulders are too slender
For all that weight
You only wanted someone to love you
We are all so unreliable
Broken and beautiful
That’s how I see you
Broken and beautiful
I love you just the way you are
Update: In the most recent iteration, I have replaced the four middle lines of the first verse. If you are keeping score, that means I only salvaged four lines, the chorus, and a chord progression.
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